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Did you lie to me,
are you who you say you are?
Did you betray me,
call me names behind my back?
Did you run from me,
when I needed you?

Who are you,
leaving me like that?
Why did you do that,
making me feel so bad?
And if you aren't who you say you are,
how can I know if I am who I think I am?

How will I know,
that you didn't lie?
How can I trust,
you ever again?
How shall I continue,
carrying on as if nothing happened?

Happy childhood,
sad childhood.
Being out with friends,
yet excluded from the others.
Sought my own way out,
but never found it.

Happy me,
sad me.
How will the world,
look for me now?
And how will I,
look into my own eyes,
ever again?
My descriptions for poems tend to be so empty...

I just wish someone understands what they mean,
even though I know it's a false hope.
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The capitals are good. And the paragraphs are good too.
the comma's sometimes look weird as they are in their position.
you did good on this one. keep it up.
It will be certain to give people goosebumps, just like me. You know how to get people to think about this.
And it really has a meaning. the topic is very original.
don't worry. The discription doesn't have to be filled with words that people care more about than the poem itself. Maybe put a paragraph of the poem in it? That wants to make people read it. good job. really.
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PouringBlood Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh.. Goosebumps occured on me.
I am a fan of your artwork, miss.

This is... It's just awesome. Please don't waste a talent like this.
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DarkNymfa Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, thanks. X3 I like writing these poems, even though I feel like no one understands what I'm trying to say. XD

And I'll try to not waste it. Too bad I still prefer drawing over writing poems. XD
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PouringBlood Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think some people understand it, tough they don't say it. I kinda understand it. It really touches me tough.

my sees on this poem is:

the past already happened, and you can't return what you did. you make each other feel bad if you do something wrong that has many consequences for each other.

that's what occurs in my toughts.
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DarkNymfa Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, the thing is, I think in kind of odd ways sometimes, make weird connections others (usually) don't see, or I'm wording things differently.
That's also what I like about poems. You can make of it what you want, as long as it means something to you.

For example, this one was more about how people can always complain about their past being so bad or so good, it has been both. But indeed, what happened has happened and you can't change it, whether you want it or not.
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PouringBlood Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know a person like this too. Sometimes I have to progress what he says to me. But when I understand it, it makes very much sense.
Poems are the same. :3
The way you write just makes me wanna read more. x3
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DarkNymfa Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Good thing I plan on writing more of them then. XD

And I guess that logic isn't the same for some persons. Too bad thinking in a different way usually gets named as autism. :I
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PouringBlood Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'll definetly read your work :)

I understand it. I work with people who are mentally not well, but if people talk about autism, I don't call that weird in any way. Even if people think differently, they shouldn't even TRY to make fun of those. It's horrible! D:
You are smart. I didn't even think about it once when we started conversations. You are just as other people. Autism is just a name. It doesn't really mean anything.
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DarkNymfa Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Whooh~!

Yeah, it's kind of annoying, especially considering that they actually use autism as a bad word here, like people use gay and stuff, to call people names. It's kind of annoying.
I mean, it's not like people with autism are really different or anything. Pretty much everyone is a bit autistic in their own way.
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